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[Dan Wilson]

Hi Spirit,

 

Thank you for the kind words and the suggestion re the ride cymbal.

 

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi,

Nice song. Looking forward to hear more from you.

Dan

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Thanked by: Spirit

[Dan Wilson]

Nice track. I like your orchestration with the strings, very tasteful. Looking forward to hearing more.

Dan

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[Dan Wilson]

Nice track, enjoyed listening to it. Really dug your solo and the ending was perfect. Looking forward to more.

Dan

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[Dan Wilson]

Hi Spirit,

Solid groove, I liked the balance you got in the mix. Looking forward to more of this.

 

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

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[Dan Wilson]

Hi Chris,

 

I liked the song “All The Time”, it reminded me of early David Bowie. I agree with Torbjorn that the vocals could come down a bit, it may help the guitars to stand out. I really liked the wah sound on the guitar. Over all I thought the groove was spot on.

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Torbjorn,

Like the song and your singing. Looking forward to hearing more of your music.

 

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi Bear-Faced Cow,

I know what you mean. This is the first time I really used C&V for a song. I drawn to this particular SDX cymbal selection with the Gretsch round badge kit. I have to admit compared to the newer SDX’s the kit load size is really small and that always kinda of put me off but it worked out okay.

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi Jord,

 

Thanks for the advice/ suggestions. This is exactly the kind of feedback I am looking for. I look forward to trying each of your suggestions.

 

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi Joni,

I enjoyed the track. I really liked the clarity of the lead guitar. If I was going to give any criticism, I would say lower the ride cymbal a bit. Keep them coming.

 

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi Rallyboy101,

Thanks for all of your advice. Maybe in the future I will get the song mastered by a professional. It getting to the point of wanting to replace things in the song to make if “better” like the rhythm guitar I played on the left side. I am a drummer not a guitar player, it is really just me having a little fun in my studio.

For now I am going to step away from this song and take the stuff I learned and apply it to another song.

Really enjoyed listening to Shane MacGowan’s Lonesome Highway.

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

[Dan Wilson]

Hi Rallyboy,

Thanks again for your comments I really appreciate it. I remixed the song again and tried bringing in the guitars in a bit and moved the organ part off centre to open room up for the vocals. Funny thing is my brother did do the backup vocals. I guess being brothers we sound a little too much alike.

I have heard your songs and I really enjoyed the tunes. Can’t wait to hear the finished version of “Somewhere Far Away”

Dan

Logic X, SD3, SD2, iMac

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